February 1, 2014

The Frozen Mountain (Twine Story)

I wanted to do another short Twine jam today, so I asked a friend for a theme to help me write the story.  I took her suggestion of "Climbing Everest" and wrote The Frozen Mountain in about four hours.

This one was a little harder to write than Space Cruiser Panic.  That story had a futuristic setting with a lot of room to fill in details, while the landscape in this story is sparse, unforgiving, and realistic.  Much more of my writing had to be dedicated to imagery rather than the absurd.  Still, I think this story is worth reading.

As always, any feedback is appreciated.

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