April 24, 2014

Patisserie Montreal (Twine Story)

I wrote another interactive story, this time as a final project for my Food Writing course.  It deals with my experiences in Montreal this semester.



This one was a little easier to write, since I wrote about my own experiences rather than some fictional world.  The expandable details are a bit lengthier than those from my previous stories and cover a broader range of topics.  A few are a bit heavy in terms of the amount of text presented, so I'm going to focus on writing tighter in my next stories.

As always, any kind of feedback is appreciated.

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